Competing with the Piano Tuner
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Competing with the Piano Tuner, my third collection, appeared from Seren in 1998. It is a Poetry Book Society Special Commendation and was longlisted for the Whitbread Prize.
.... this is poetry of risky
association, of resonance ricocheting about strange regions. The generous
trawl....produces here some stunning, and stunningly original poems...a
source of inspiration for the imaginatively fluent.' ....a stylish performance....Elegy and
lyric celebration interpenetrate, descriptive precision forming a basis
for imaginative lift-off.....It moves through the implications of an
inconsequential remark about a mirror by Doctor Johnson to a glimpsed
metaphysics of cloud .... divergent clinical and subjective realities are
both encompassed by the humane lucidity of the narrative voice, which
effects a brilliantly judged conclusion....' In Competing with the Piano Tuner, Tim
Liardet deploys his usual stunning repertories. There is the fizzing
vocabulary become content. Elsewhere quotidian terms are redeployed and
renewed. Liardet's long lines make for a portmanteau poetry, full of
literary allusion. Above all, they convey an intensely sensual poetry of
the concrete world...'
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Ways of Seeing with
Heatstroke
I'll start again. A horse that is led on a rein
down
an alley that is narrow, by a girl.
A hand, a rein, a rein that is
drawn
by a hand down an alley, plus a horse.
A horse that is walking
down an alley
that is narrow has a girl, attached to it.
A rein that
loops gently, down an alley,
with a horse and a girl at either end.
A
ring at the centre that holds the rein,
holds the girl, holds the horse. It
is silver.
The blossom that floats, that is sucked
down the alley,
that is blown from its branch,
that is a draught of rain, of ochre
snow.
The sun that bulges into the alley
or the alley that cramps the
sun, mostly dark.
The ground that clops upon the hooves.
Mirror Angled at Sky
' ...In the morning the mirror is consulted
again,'
said Doctor Johnson, but
not of this one dumped in the back of a
Peugeot truck:
it is left, one corner broken off, among the riven
architraves,
and won't be consulted again.
It is in with the ripped out
sinks, the sofa springs' dying octaves,
it is with the builder's rubble
that is valueless.
Now that its silver leaf is
peeling off, it is pond
water with gleams beneath the surface.
There is a frogspawn of
rust-spots. Black stipple on mercury.
There is a cloudiness
of depth and
current, scratched by teeth beneath the glass
but bright enough for
provincial eaves and firs to crane
over - for the first glimpse.
The
mirror is put out. It will not be consulted again.
First, there is the
misplacement - a veiled indoor convenience
must cope will all that
light.
It reflects a worm's eye view of what will soon evaporate:
the
passers-by with collars up for whom spring broke
too early, knock
wet
turgid blossom onto it - equally misplaced where breeze-blocks
sit,
as incongruous as the fractured seventy eight
of Beethoven's
Fifth
dumped in the stingers - where nature and something else
conflate.
Second, there's the passivity - the mirror tilted as it
is
reflects every detail
of onrushing sky - the gulfs of blue and
weightless cumulus
that drift like floes, that billow, fly, and break
apart.
And so I think this bit
of junk's not just the still reflecting
point of art
but may be likened to a certain juncture in
the history
of clouds,
at which formations such as these might part to
glimpse
maelstroms both human and equine, far below,
and which will
yet
tear softly apart, to show the goings on of god knows
what.
Lastly, there are the soft concealments - the mirror invokes
the
droplets
of wet that steamed off with the last to smile in it:
the
youthful nurse's theatre of unwitnessed face,
the couple who
moved in and
out of it some twenty times a day.
Now all that consults it is sky. Soon,
it will go
to the council dump,
but here finds cloud after cloud moving
slow
though its skin of liver-spots is utterly still,
under the glass
of which pours this
bright moving floor or conveyor belt,
freckle-faced.
The Curtain of the Water
Bed
After Liu Hsun
The possible simplicity. Ah yes.
The
sunlit sill the sill, and the jug the jug.
A language bare of ornament or
quibble -
the coition of dowel and glue a kitchen table.
Jug. The love
of plump and secular things;
religion the saddled thought, in search of the
thought -
the self a source of marvellous accidents
inclining because it
must to the present tense.
But you had to get in my way, didn't
you,
tasting of freshly sliced apple, furrow to upper lip?
The jug became
china, the table wood, and we
indulged instead the longing for
complexity.
Lumm's Tower
Retracing a hesitant path where the steps were
worn
Uncle Henry for sixty years climbed the tower
of a stammer, one step
up, ten down, one up.
For every inch he ascended some odd sort of
gravity
drew him back, to begin again at the bottom.
If he tripped on the
indefinite article he drew blood
on the next step's jagged ellipsis,
attempting a curse.
A tailback of fat vowels crowded the
stairwell,
impatient tourists shoving the uncertain guide.
Or perhaps
he was building the tower as he climbed.
And what an odd shape it turned out:
lopsided,
tier upon tier, teetering and top-heavy,
comprised of stones
no human could hope to shift.
He could see for sure what he wanted to
say
but it was many steps ahead, like a vision.
It leaned over his
life, part climbed, or part built.
Because he was anxious he'd stumble, poor
man,
he stumbled, and the tower was the vertigo
of the tongue's
extreme reluctance
to contemplate the climb, though the brain was
game.
One day, he swore, he would truly climb
the edifice of mishit
notes which rose
towards the unified language, so tall.
Up through clouds,
he dreamed, was the top of it
where all his dropped and broken words were
stuck
together, his tongue at last obedient
in the glinting cupola of
meaning.